Love Endures (Snoring) : a song as a gift

Posted by David on November 20, 2009
Just For Fun, Music, Our Creative Community

Let me fill you in on the past year, creatively speaking…

Remember Our Creative Community? And my own personal goal to post 12 recorded masterpieces (humour me…) this year?

No?  Well, seems I didn’t either.

Actually, I did…I was just ignoring it…

It all went so smoothly for about 5 minutes.  Then I decided to go and produce our church’s first worship album, and it all went a little haywire.  Great excuse huh!

The last song I posted here was back in May.  MAY?!?  Where did the last 6 months go?  Wait, I know exactly where they went.  Lots and lots and LOTS of hours in a recording studio with the awesome worship team from Awesome Church.  It’s a sacrifice I’ve been glad to make, though Diane and I have definitely felt the strain too.  The album is very nearly done though, and this is a good good good thing.

Anyway…

About a month ago, I did a post over at my good friend Jenni Clayville’s blog telling a bit of my story, because like everyone  … I have one. Or two. Maybe more.

In the comments, Jenni’s amazing husband Brian requested a song for his birthday.  Now, he may have been joking (I really don’t know – I never asked – it’s not like I haven’t embarked on this personalised song thing before), but it was the impetus I needed to write something of my own again and see if I could remember how to do this.  I’ve been writing and recording congregational music all year, which involves a very very different process to how I approach my non-church music, which mainly comprises mini electronic pop epics (poptronica).

So I wrote this. You now have your own song, Brian.

And Jenni, I still want to re-do yours properly as a thank-you for sending me the audio file of Brian’s snoring that inspired this.  I’m just looking for a big band… who’ll work for free…

Gotta say though…my snoring is WAY worse than Brian’s. Though the only time it’s been recorded I had sinus and a completely blocked nose, so…

Back to the song…

Lyrics: as usual for me, it took a long time to get the lyrics to happen. Music = easy peasy, but lyrics…no. Except when I’m writing church music, when the lyrics often come first and suggest the melody, etc.  In this case, as for all my commissioned “song-for-a-friend” works, I try to dig up plenty of dirt from significant others, but usually most of the good stuff comes from Twitter and Facebook stalking anyway.  Add in some inspiration from a great post on Brian’s blog, and we have a song that combines Biblical truth, snoring,  fishing for sharks, gas and twittering…amongst other things.

Music: again, as usual for me, it’s crammed too full of ideas because that’s pretty much how I roll all the time; always lots going on.  I love the production side of making music, even though this isn’t produced as well as I’d like it to be, purely due to time constraints.  It also has a few of my now trademark twists, which are therefore not twists because it would be a twist to do something straight.  I may be the M.Night Shyamalan of poptronica.

Love Endures (Snoring) by dg4G

Waking everybody with a sound
That’s been likened to sawing
Some call it snoring
All the best husbands do it
So our wives have something to tweet about

As if the bobbleheaded conversation
sprinkled with some speculation
covering the sanitation habits of the generation
that we’re raising all across the nation
…wasn’t enough

(some choral wailing)

Kids are upside down in nearly
Every single family picture
It’s probably better that way
Definitely better than attempts
to fish for sharks from the car

I wonder whose genes he got?
Should this be rhymed with bergamot?
Maybe, but probably not
Though citrus-scented gas
Might be a winner

(some more choral wailing)

(Love)
Love never gives up, never looks back
Never gives up, never looks back, never gives up…
(endures)

(Love endures)…

Waking everybody with a sound
That’s been likened to sawing
Often called snoring
And if I’m not sleeping through life, you’re not going to either.

**Could I have possibly written a more tongue twisting bridge? Why yes, I could have. This abridged tongue twister (ha!) was the compromised version… :shock: It was also much harder to sing at 12.30am than it is now at 10.00am. Hmmmm…  Did you hear the stumbles in there?  I might as well have sung “dup nebber dip dup”…

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17 Comments to Love Endures (Snoring) : a song as a gift

David
November 19, 2009

Thanks Brandon. !

tam
November 19, 2009

my family is still sleeping, but i cant wait to play this song!!! actually…i should play it and set it next to brents ear!!!

David
November 19, 2009

hahaha. It's got some good bass boom in there with the right speakers :)

buchanan23
November 19, 2009

Great song… haha! You are one creative dood!

Crystal Renaud
November 19, 2009

oh my word, that snoring sound byte is soooooooooooo funny!

and you KNOW i love a good bridge… that's a goodie.

David
November 19, 2009

you should have heard me trying to stumble through the original lyrics I had for it.

ie: the lyrics that are there PLUS love never keeps score, cares for others more…etc.

I couldnt wrap my mouth around it at that breakneck speed…ha

And the snoring, might be ever so slightly enhanced…just a bit…and multitracked. This song has 24 vocal tracks in fact, and 18 instruments.
:shock:

Russ Hutto
November 19, 2009

Haha Great stuff!

Jenni
November 19, 2009

you are SO awesome! i've listened to this 5 times now. i laugh every time… the bridge! hahahahaha!

we love you guys!

Jenni
November 19, 2009

nice!!! there are times brian snores WAY louder than this… but he wasn't sick during this recording :)

David
November 19, 2009

if it's keeping you amused its work is done :)

we love you too!

Ed Dyer
November 19, 2009

A personalized song for a friend is a great way of expressing friendship. Very creative David.

Snoring and love are two words I don't think of as belonging in a song about a relationship, as least not one that is likely to last too long :)

I enjoyed listening to it. I really liked the music. Is "mini electronic pop epics" a musical genre? :)

I love the last line, "And if I’m not sleeping through life, you’re not going to either."

I like the following verse, even though it doesn't make much sense to me. That's probably why I like it. A fun song, and I assume a song about snoring and love is meant to be funny :) , doesn't need to make sense, probably better if it doesn't.

"I wonder whose genes he got?
Should this be rhymed with bergamot?
Maybe, but probably not
Though citrus-scented gas
Might be a winner"

David
November 20, 2009

Very astute on the love and snoring Ed. This is where grace comes in to save the day – haha.

I’ve never been a big fan of pigeon-holing music into genres, though the US seems to demand it be done. So I invented poptronica. Or someone else might have. Regardless, I think that’s the genre most of these fun friend songs fall into.

Full understanding of the lyrics for these things always requires a bit of inside knowledge of the people or the relationship…or patience to scour Twitter and Facebook.

Then, as in that verse you like, there’s some random things which I link up with something completely left field. The bergamot and its citrus notes being the left-fieldedness in that case.

Brunettekoala
November 21, 2009

LOL!!!

David
November 20, 2009

That is always the intention with these things – lots of lol :D

Pokinatcha
November 21, 2009

Ha ha this is great!

David
November 22, 2009

Wow, thanks Brian.

And a gift for me…um…my birthday's in February…and I'd quite like to find that big band to help me re-record "Jenni, Jenni" as I hear it in my head. Sure you can arrange that in time right? :D

brian
November 22, 2009

I love it David! It means a lot that you would spend so much time to make such a quality song. I still need to listen on some quality speakers so I can truly appreciate it. How can I ever give you a gift so great?
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